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Re: Different - chapter three
You told me to be harsh so. . . I still don't know where this is going. Which isn't that bad. I guess I'm the kind of person that doesn't ...
Sep 20, 2009 -
Re: Ideas
OK it sounds like your stuck. I'm sure you have interests, but that doesn't mean you have an idea right?. Believe me I know. I kind of made up a ...
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: No title yet... reviews appreciated
OK, this is certainly interesting. Although I have no clue what's going on, I'm fascinated. So many questions, like who's Drake? How did he just vanish? Where and at what ...
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: You know you're a writer when...
You know you're a writer when you're watching TV and wonder what you character would do if he/she were there.
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: Burn the Flame
I like it! It's really good. The way the images come in your head. Very nice. Sorry, that's it, I have nothing else to say. Brain-dead moment. :P
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: What would your characters do?
"I guess I already am - in a bad way!" -Kevin What would you do if someone told you that you had to save the world?
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Silent Chaos - chapter 3
OK I wasn't expecting that. To tell you the truth, this isn't the most exciting story I've ever read. It needs something, something to define it. Sorry I'm not being ...
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: What would YOU do?
Stroke it. Love it. What? Llamas can be good pets . . . I think. What would you do if you had six arms?
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Secrett Seregreen (Title Unknown) chapters 4 & 5
Wow, :shock: wasn't expecting vampires. OK I admit I'm not a vampire fan. Actually I don't like 'em at all, but that's my opinion. Now I have an idea of ...
Sep 15, 2009 -
Re: Cats vs. Dogs
Cats. I love my kitty!
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Different - chapter two
Hello ofir, here is your review. In many ways I wish i could write like you. Your characters are so real, each of them having their own personality. That takes ...
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Building a Strong Character
Yes! Awesome advice! THANK YOU!!! :smt003
Sep 14, 2009 -
Re: Sweet reviews from a Muffin
Hey could you check this out? Thank you Pudin! :P
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Secrett Seregreen (Title Unknown) Chapters 2 & 3
First thing, what does a rock star have to do with the plot? Unless he has some important role, I'd suggest spending your time showing us more of this cool ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Secrett Seregreen <edited>prologue & chapter 1
It was dark out and the only things visible were the head lights of rapidly moving vehicles in the distance. I liked it as soon as I read this! Some ...
Sep 13, 2009
